Maine apne aap se kuch puch dale sabal,
Par itfaak ka kya kare?
Jo har jabab me tera hi naam ata hai.
Maine tumse baat karna to chor dya,
Par iss yadast ka kya kare?
Jo tumko na bhula paya.
Maine tumhara khwab dekhna to chor dya,
Par iss sapno ka kya kare?
Wo to sala khud b khud dastak de deta hai.
Maine to tumhe sochna bhi chor dya,
Par iss mann ka kya kare?
Ghum-phir kar tumhi pe aa rukta hai.
Maine to tum pe marna bhi chor dya,
Par iss jindgi ka kya kare?
Wo to tumhare lye hi jinda hai.
Maine to tumhare ruh se bhi nata tor lya,
Par iss saanso ka kya kare?
Jo tumhare lye hi chlta hai.
Maine to bhukh ko risbbat de ke kaam kar lyya,
Par iss pyass ka kya kare?
Jo khud ba khud gayab ho gya.
Maine to sahar me rehna chor dya,
Par iss galiyo ka kya kare?
Jisme teri khushboo ka aabhash hota hai.
Maine to tanhai ke saath sauda kar lya,
Par iss GST jaise yaado ka kya kare?
Jo phir se tax banke yaado me atta hai.
Maine to dukho ke saath jeena sikh lya tha,
Par iss khushi ka kya kare?
Jo Tumhe dekhte hi aa jati hai.
Maine to hassi se samjhota kar lya tha,
Par iss aansu ka kya kare?
Jo tumhare aansu ko dekhte hi bin bulaye mehman ki tarah aa jati hai.
Maine asadhya hi rahna soch lya,
Par iss nind ka kya kare?
Sala diamond se bhi kimti ho chla hai.
Mai to pagal banke hi jeene ka soch lya ,
Par iss duniya ka kya kare?
Jo hame pagal banke jeene nahi deti hai.
Maine to vishwash karna bhi chor dya,
Par iss dhokhe ka kya kare?
Jo kisi film ki tarah aakho ke samne tumhari yaado ki picture chla jaati hai.
Maine to looggo ko pehchan na bhi chor dya,
Par iss parchai ka kya kare?
Jo hawa ki tarah mere charo oor teri yaad bankr ghumti rahti hai.
Maine to tumhe sab sach bata dya,
Par iss aadat ka kya kare?
Jiskee karam tumne mujhe hi khilona bana ke rakh dya.
Maine to bhuut samay ke bare me bhi sochna chor dya,
Par sala iss ghari ka kya kare?
Jo har bakt wahi samay dikha ke jajbati kr deta hai.
Maine to tumhe apna kehna bhi chor dya,
Par iss Kaminey dosto ka kya kare?
Jo har wakt masumiyat se guftgu kr jate hai.
&_Keshav Sawarn|© 2017 LoSeAcTiOn
All rights reserved.
Everything was fine but GST was awesome 😂😂😂
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Thnx bro
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U become a gud writter 👌👌
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Thnx bro……. i’m jst try my best…rst is on ur feedback which might be leds me to there
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Nice line but u cn do much btr as i thought……..!!!
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Ill try my bst my frnd….nd thnx for ur golden feedback!!!
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Is man ka kya karu ? Jo bina comment kiye reh na paya tere humour ko salaam tu itna Acha likha leta hai .
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Thnx …for ur golden feedback…. again thanks a lot!!!
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Loved your poem likhte raho dil khush kar diya
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Ok….. i’ll try
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Sikyat ? kabhi bichre dost ke bare me likha karo
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Okkkk….sure…my nxt poem is on that topic
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Awesome bro keep writing..u will become a good writer..👌👌👍
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Thnx bro…im jst trying my best….rest is as on u all’s feedback…mich might be make me a gud …..
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Great brother awesome. But can I know that for whom this lines belongs to. Because this types of extraordinary extreme heart touching lines cannot comes through pen or mind it can only be comes through very sad heart
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This makes u my bst frnd dear….bcz kuch log hi hote hai jo aap ko haste dekh ke bhi puch lete hai taklif kya hai… kuki ooo apke bare mei aaap se bhi jayda jante hai….baki tum samajh hi gye hoge….!!?????
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But afterall great lines and try to make it in parts try to write short poems in series like shikayat1. ,shikayat2 etc. Best of luck for next poem
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Okkk….nxt time i’ll keep it my mind before writing…
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Good one Keshav 😍😍
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Thnx…..!!!
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