“You Know Nothing” – RhYmOpeDia
Dear Crush,
I could say Dear first crush,
But to be honest
There was someone else before you,
Someone who didn’t get away,
But someone I let go.
Well, thanks to you.
I’m not sure if you knew for certain,
My feelings before I confessed to you,
But I don’t regret letting you know.
However, there are some things,
I didn’t let you know,
Like the time I walked through your picture,
Although they were attractive
But unwillingly i couldn’t stop myself from reacting to that.
Or the time I hovered over WhatsApp for you,
You didn’t know about it.
And checking you on insta, fb
You didn’t know that either.
Or the time i make out to chat with you.
Or the time I watched you,
Literally walk out of my life,
You don’t know nothing about.
You don’t even know that –
If I said I wanted to date you,
Then know that I want to date all of you,
Your insecurities, and your ambitions,
Your body and mind.
There is one more thing you don’t know,
Believe me when I say-
That you are my best heartbreak, yet.
Please don’t forget me.
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Good poems are confessions; secrets revealed; admissions; exposure; vulnerability. They are the hearts way of bloodletting.
Thank you for this.
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First of all thanks for such a beautiful comments. And you are welcome
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This is the best .
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Thanks brother!!!
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Superb one…. Just killer one
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Thanks dear!
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Beautifully expressed feelings… I always feel that there is lot to say but the way your poem enshrined the feelings is complete in itself.
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Thanks brother… And it’s good to know that my work entertain you or you can co-relate yourself with it
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Ahaan !!! So, eventually I get it she is your best devotion and worst distraction.
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Nothing to say but just 😜😜😜😛😂😂🤣😂
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All I can say, awesome
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Thanks for your beautiful comment!
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You nailed it bro….I think it is a poem from which anyone can relate his feelings.
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Thanks brother!!
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Writing is the best way to express what’s in our mind .
You expressed many of the teenagers mind here .
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Thanks…!
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I’ve been there, too. You articulate it really well. That final phrase is especially beautiful. 😢
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Thanks for your feedback… And it’s my pleasure that you can co-relate with this one
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you opening was awesome,,
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Thanks
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your opening I meant,,
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Okkk… I get that
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cool 🙂
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I love the way you write😍😍😍… Can i get your contact number… As i fill the contract form you never replied 🤞
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Thanks dear for your compliment!!
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And sorry… You’ll get reply soon!
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aahaann….i guess u should mention her name as well..
mazaa aata😂😂😂😂
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You’ll know soon soon…. So keep the patience dear🤞🤞🤞
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Thats amazing and beautiful, really good work, keep it up! ✌✌
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Thnkss!!!
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If my late husband Bill had written a letter like this one, his marriage proposal wouldn’t have been such a shock.
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Ohh ..So I can conclude that your proposal was a shocking one…Interesting!! Btw thanks for reading
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Wow that was heartfelt especially when you said, “someone you let go”
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That poem was raw.
At the end you wrote, about having these type of experiences and to comment.
COMMENT- I had quite a few, but only the ones that disserved it. Let them think you´re the dummy, my word and phylosophy is EASY,calm down and relax and focus without get exciting to what the other person is doing and how, if need be if she is a bitch, how to screw her up while she thinks she is the smart one. It obviously takes some training of the mind, but if a dummy can do this, my guess is that more people can do it. Just for the persons that are just naturally bad.
It struck a cord, since it actually happened to me today. I managed very subtibly to get this bitch out of the home. Wanted money, go to a Chineese restaurant (go figure this one out),and the rest.
I have to say ( who cares really) that at the end of the day I´m responsable for lettiing in my life these type of people, no wonder any news? Yes, obviously she will try to survive, fucking me up that is,
I´m too kind,until the moment of STOP sign.
What a long crazy-to much information comment
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Greetings fellow poet, an awesome piece you have here. So relatable to my own situation I feel as if I could have written it myself, although yours would obviously have been the better one.
Btw, thanks for liking The Poets Prayer. I really appreciate the support.
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Thanks for such a beautiful comment!!!
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Don’t love someone so such means blindly that he/she can play with your feelings… because the society is bi***h because it’s confirm that when ever you start to give importance tk someone at the same time that person start playing with you….so it’s request to write something on this.
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Will keep Ur advice in mind bro…thanks for reading… reply
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How nice and brave!! lovely post!!!
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Thanks!!!
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💙💚💛💙💚💛
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Yes I have a question for you.
The first crush is not the first crush if there was another one before the first crush. Am I right?
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Yes you are absolutely right…. And it’s good to be honest before any relationship… That’s why.
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I know I don’t know 😇
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That’s funny….
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Thank you for liking my post. Now i am more motivated. And one more thing, you use to write in Hindi sometimes which is our national language. So all the best.
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I’m also from India my friend…. And thanks for your such a keen interest
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You’re most welcome
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Well written 🙂
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Thank You!!!
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a very modern take on love and emotion, reminds me of Rupi Kaur.
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Thanks…!!
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