I sent a truck full of kisses,
To her house best I could do ,
As my lips too weak to produce a mountain😆.
And when i see her smiling ,
I don’t know which one of us is happier.
I don’t know what to read next,
I don’t know what to write next,
But I’m writing, don’t know why?
As I’m still learning the process of understanding what love is.
As i got it there’s no such thing ,
As that of perfect girl or true love,
Because it’s a mirage, it’s a cheat!
You either die a hero or you live long enough,
To see yourself become the villain of your own story.
This poem, ‘ Best i could do ‘ is under copyright of RhYmOpeDia.
imkeshavsawarn |
© 2018 RhYmOpeDia
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👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Thnx# Shakib
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Acha hai keep it up
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Thnx Princeraj for your such a encouraging feedback
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I give you a gold star my friend. Thanks for the visit. Hope to see you around The Writers Block. Yours Truly Gastradamus
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Thanx Gastradamus for your such a great compliment!!
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No problem buddy, you deserve it
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Its your greatness Gastradamus
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No comments…..😂😂 as these lines penetrate my heart 😂😂😆😆
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OMG!!! I got literally shocked that hiw much you co-relate yourself with that emotions….thanks for your such a valuable comment #Chandan Maurya
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Its my pleasure bro 😊
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Its your greatness Chandan 😍😘
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Badhiya bache ..kisi or chiz pe bhi likha kar ..bas aashiqui vale mat likh..😁
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Jiii Abhishek bhaiya jii…jaisa aap bole
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Specifically first few lines😍😘….amazing yaar….arr last poem ki kya baat-kya baat-kya baat….super….. now i can feel proud on u
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Thnx yaar for such beautiful comment😍!!!
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Amazing !!!!
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Thnx #harshit jha for ur comment!!
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Beat me lol, this speak to me. I like it!
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What ?? Can you explain it….i can’t understand your concern
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Ah, i mean it’s really good, that it got to me. I mean that, it beat me mentally, struck to the heart, thunderstorm.
Though i need elaboration,
I understand the poem, but the ending, the villain part.
I felt i understand, but i want to hear from you what you mean.
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In the ending of the poem i just tried to explain the hated feelings which suddenly appears in many relationship and destroy that, it counters all the feelings towards your parter with that of hate..and results as BREAKUP 😔
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Gotcha.
Yeah.
I understand.
The villain..
now i understand it more, thanks
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O nce
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what is nce mean?
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Its nice …its my mistake…as it used as short form of nice in daily chatting
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Gotcha!
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What it means?
Sorry i didn’t got it!
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Fabulous poem…
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Thanx Heena , I’m glad that you like it!
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I love it.. it’s amazing..
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Its just a humble poetic exercise…its glad for me that it got loved by you!!
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Keep the good work up….
All the very best.
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Thnx for your best wishes!!!
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Very nicely done
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Thanx for your admiration of my work!!!
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My pleasure
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